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I wouldn't use such standard synths dude I can recognize slayer. also it needs to be longer, to have a sense of a beginning, middle, & end. I like the brake but it could be a wee bit shorter of one. I know that FPC presets are fun but you should play with editing them to match you music a little better. also you should add some fruity kick low to it on the counts to give it hops!
nice work though keep it up!
I am also just starting out, Could you review my music?